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Another great addition to your repertoire of tiles! The colors and style are pretty well done, it goes well with your other shrine tile...


I think the execution on the buildings is well done. My only main critique is that they all look too similar. I think just something sm...

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Another great addition to your repertoire of tiles!

The colors and style are pretty well done, it goes well with your other shrine tiles and such. I think the only main issue I'm seeing is the perspective. I feel like given the perspective, you wouldn't see as much of the back of the roof as you are currently seeing. I would maybe reduce it by 3 to 5 pixels?
The other thing skewing perspective is the stairs. The stairs lead to an area directly above the entrance, yet the stairs start behind where the actual entrance is. I would fix this by moving the start of the stairs about 16 to 20 pixels down. I'd also make the stairs themselves a little thicker (ie: having 3 steps per tile instead of 4) look a little thicker.

Other than that I think the overall tile I great, it can just be improved upon with those simple fixes! Nice work as always man!
Kanto Stories Update
Hey guys, been making good progress on Kanto Stories lately, I posted a little update over at Relic with some more screenshots and information, check it out!
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Pokemon Rose Gold
Hey guys, I made a short game for Relic Castles 2nd game jam. You play as Red in between the events of gen 1 and 2. It's approximately 1.5 - 2 hours of gameplay. I hope people enjoy it.
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I think the execution on the buildings is well done. My only main critique is that they all look too similar. I think just something small, like a sign, or windows, on the Pokecenter would help. The mart is fine, I like the text on all of them, it looks simplistic and modern. The gym could also use something to set it apart, I like that they're similar in shape, they just need a little something to set them apart. Other than that, The shading itself seems good, though it would be nice to see some more highlights I suppose, from the implied light source. I like their modern look overall though Peekychew, nice work! Just gotta spice em up a bit :)

Vision: Nice enough, you made some important buildings for a game.

Originality: Just needs some more variety.

Technique: Well done, though I'd prefer to see highlights, but to each his own.

Impact: They look like good usable tiles haha.

I understand it was a commission, so if the person who received them is happy with them, then great! Obviously feel free to utilize the feedback or not!
Hey everyone! We're hosting a game jam over at Relic Castle! It runs until August 10th, which gives you plenty of time to work on an entry!
reliccastle.com/forums/showthr…
If you're not familiar with game jams, they're basically a challenge to see if you can make a short game in the given time frame. These games can be anywhere from 1 map, to 100 maps, it is really up to you. As long as it completely tells a story or allows you to accomplish a goal. I encourage you all to at least consider participating haha. I plan on entering a project, and I've seen work from others showing off some pretty cool projects they're working on for it. So yeah, check it out, and I hope to see you guys enter!

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I hope that your birthday has been spectacular.
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Happy birthday!
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Happy birthday! :party:
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Happy Birthday! :party:
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GrassyXertal Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Happy Birthday Justin! Super Fantastic Golden Platter Cake 3D 
I don't have much but I can't do anything much ? Maybe a fakemon for Obsidian ? <3 Playin' it and lovin' it
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Thanks! And don't worry, I don't need anything haha, I appreciate it though :)
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Happy Birthday Justin!
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Thanks Iwan!
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Thanks you for the donation!
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Thank you for making your scripts public!
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